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		<title>By: Tsamo N</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tsamo N</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Mar 2009 03:46:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tsamo

Mrs. Gu
English
Block c
March 9
Easy writing
			LORD OF THE FLIES
The boys in the book called lord of the flies used different  survival instincts in order to stay alive. they used some resources  like fire ,shelter, food, water.
Did you ever imagine being in an airplane, and all of a sodden the plane crashes and you find you self in and island, in the sea or some were you do not even  know. among you there is no adult to decide what is write or wrong and you decide to vote for some one to be your leader and the person is just as young as you are how would you fill, that’s what happens in the book called Lord of the Flies and there were only boys in the plane crash. But. These boys were really brave . imagine sleeping in a shelter every day without any blanket nothing  just exposed to the cold air and the only thing covert you at night were the lives of trees used to build your shelter and some of them did not have warm clothes to put on at night so the sleep in shorts  
    Another thing they used in other to survive was Shelter is means  by which you protect your body from excess exposure from the sun, cold, wind, rain, or snow. any thing that takes away and adds to your overall body temperature can be your enemy. clothing is the first line of shelter protection, when the  plain landed on the island and after they got unified the first thing they thought of was fire and the second thing was how to protect themselves at night, so they decided to built shelters, every one participated on building they each wanted a place to sleep and protect them selves at night. 	
Food/water.whitout water or food you can’t stay alive. So the  boys also had to look to see what kind of food and animals fruits that could be found on the island which human could eat. and they did a really good job on these too separating the groups which Jack was the leader of the hunters and the animals the hunted were pigs and rusted them to eat for dinner an  some other fruits and when the food was ready it was basically every man for him self. 
	With out water you can’t live right. There was a little beading pool on the island were the boys toke their shower every day in they also used the water for drinking and turning out their fire.
	There were some good and bad things they did with these sources for example fire, when the fire was burning the island, it was good and bad at the same time. It was good because if and air plain was or a ship was pacing they could  easily be rescue and the bad  thing was that  a boy got burned in the forest another was the hunters   using their tools for what they should not be using it for and people fighting on food.</description>
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<p>Mrs. Gu<br />
English<br />
Block c<br />
March 9<br />
Easy writing<br />
			LORD OF THE FLIES<br />
The boys in the book called lord of the flies used different  survival instincts in order to stay alive. they used some resources  like fire ,shelter, food, water.<br />
Did you ever imagine being in an airplane, and all of a sodden the plane crashes and you find you self in and island, in the sea or some were you do not even  know. among you there is no adult to decide what is write or wrong and you decide to vote for some one to be your leader and the person is just as young as you are how would you fill, that’s what happens in the book called Lord of the Flies and there were only boys in the plane crash. But. These boys were really brave . imagine sleeping in a shelter every day without any blanket nothing  just exposed to the cold air and the only thing covert you at night were the lives of trees used to build your shelter and some of them did not have warm clothes to put on at night so the sleep in shorts<br />
    Another thing they used in other to survive was Shelter is means  by which you protect your body from excess exposure from the sun, cold, wind, rain, or snow. any thing that takes away and adds to your overall body temperature can be your enemy. clothing is the first line of shelter protection, when the  plain landed on the island and after they got unified the first thing they thought of was fire and the second thing was how to protect themselves at night, so they decided to built shelters, every one participated on building they each wanted a place to sleep and protect them selves at night.<br />
Food/water.whitout water or food you can’t stay alive. So the  boys also had to look to see what kind of food and animals fruits that could be found on the island which human could eat. and they did a really good job on these too separating the groups which Jack was the leader of the hunters and the animals the hunted were pigs and rusted them to eat for dinner an  some other fruits and when the food was ready it was basically every man for him self.<br />
	With out water you can’t live right. There was a little beading pool on the island were the boys toke their shower every day in they also used the water for drinking and turning out their fire.<br />
	There were some good and bad things they did with these sources for example fire, when the fire was burning the island, it was good and bad at the same time. It was good because if and air plain was or a ship was pacing they could  easily be rescue and the bad  thing was that  a boy got burned in the forest another was the hunters   using their tools for what they should not be using it for and people fighting on food.</p>
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		<title>By: Tsamo N</title>
		<link>http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/stumbling-piggies-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2697</link>
		<dc:creator>Tsamo N</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Mar 2009 01:50:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>kelsey i think yours is realy good but you migth need more ideas in you paragraph</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>kelsey i think yours is realy good but you migth need more ideas in you paragraph</p>
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		<title>By: Kelsey M.</title>
		<link>http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/stumbling-piggies-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2692</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelsey M.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Mar 2009 04:09:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tyler, your paragraph is very well written, but I think that you could delete the first three sentences and use a better attention grabber.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tyler, your paragraph is very well written, but I think that you could delete the first three sentences and use a better attention grabber.</p>
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		<title>By: Kelsey M.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kelsey M.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Mar 2009 04:08:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rachael, I think that your first sentence need to be revised a little bit. It&#039;s a bit choppy and there area  few spelling and grammatical errors.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rachael, I think that your first sentence need to be revised a little bit. It&#8217;s a bit choppy and there area  few spelling and grammatical errors.</p>
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		<title>By: bill</title>
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		<dc:creator>bill</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Mar 2009 01:51:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tsamo i think you have a very good start but u need to have a better attention grabing sentence</description>
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