Comments on: Unwanted Miracles LOF Thesis Statements w/ Intro Paragraphs http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/unwanted-miracles-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/ A Convenient Classroom Tool Thu, 12 Nov 2009 04:01:42 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Jackson W http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/unwanted-miracles-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2705 Jackson W Mon, 16 Mar 2009 00:03:36 +0000 http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-2705 I forgot the question mark on the end of the last sentence. :( It doesn't come across the same now... I forgot the question mark on the end of the last sentence. :( It doesn’t come across the same now…

]]> By: Jackson W http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/unwanted-miracles-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2704 Jackson W Mon, 16 Mar 2009 00:02:38 +0000 http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-2704 "I got a little lost in your beggining paragraph." Where did I loose you? That won't do. "It is definitely well thought out and interesting." That may be a bit outlandish. "I’m not exactly sure what your thesis is" The self destructive tendencies of any “proper” culture take root in the norms and conduct which it imposes and enforces upon itself "are you talking about society falling apart?" Vaguely... am I ever talking about anything else “I got a little lost in your beggining paragraph.” Where did I loose you? That won’t do.

“It is definitely well thought out and interesting.” That may be a bit outlandish.

“I’m not exactly sure what your thesis is” The self destructive tendencies of any “proper” culture take root in the norms and conduct which it imposes and enforces upon itself

“are you talking about society falling apart?” Vaguely… am I ever talking about anything else

]]> By: Emily H http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/unwanted-miracles-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2703 Emily H Sun, 15 Mar 2009 23:07:27 +0000 http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-2703 Mike: Unfortunately I could barely make out what you were saying because of the errors. Perhaps look over it next time. I agree with Robyn in the statement that you need more info because to me it seems like you are just touching on several different topics. Mike: Unfortunately I could barely make out what you were saying because of the errors. Perhaps look over it next time. I agree with Robyn in the statement that you need more info because to me it seems like you are just touching on several different topics.

]]> By: Emily H http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/unwanted-miracles-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2702 Emily H Sun, 15 Mar 2009 23:04:54 +0000 http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-2702 Jackson: I got a little lost in your beggining paragraph. It is definitely well thought out and interesting. I'm not exactly sure what your thesis is, but are you talking about society falling apart? Jackson: I got a little lost in your beggining paragraph. It is definitely well thought out and interesting. I’m not exactly sure what your thesis is, but are you talking about society falling apart?

]]> By: Robyn C. http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/unwanted-miracles-lof-thesis-statements-w-intro-paragraphs/#comment-2701 Robyn C. Sun, 15 Mar 2009 17:07:09 +0000 http://css8thgradeenglish.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-2701 mike i think u need to add alittle more info and "beef" mike i think u need to add alittle more info and “beef”

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